I really cannot offer higher praise for any work than I am to you right now!
First of all, the bright yellow of the flower draws your eyes impulsively to the words you've highlighted 'To be or not to be'. You're technique certainly worked and the impact is stunning! To have such a beautiful plant act as a spotlight to such a torrid and melancholy scene was also a very good point, and I suppose you could even call it irony. The lighting is superb, and your piece successfully fulfills it's purpose. You're work is very impressive and I look forward to seeing your other works