I find this photo interesting, possibly just because of my music background, but still, interesting. I like how the lyrics match the small origami sailboat, and how you focus on the words. However, I believe it could be improved by focusing on the boat, too. It follows the rule of thirds, placing the boat on the intersection, but I feel like it could be made better with some cropping. I like how the boat does not follow the lines of the music, adding an interesting skewed element. I however, do not not know what the small, shiny objects are in the background, and do not know what they are for. Overall, I find this to be a very nice picture.
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